Part 1:
Ode to the dreamers
Ode to the people who dreams
They are the builders of our world
Ode to their dreams
Everyday is seen as a new opportunity
Everyday is full of hope
Full of hope for a new life
Ode to their acheivements
Followers of dreams
Allowing themselves to dream
Willing them to come true
Ode to their courage
Their will to risk everything
Their will to succeed
They are all living the dream
Part 2
A beautiful mistake
I did not want you,
I did not need you,
I did not expect you,
You were a mistake,
But such a beautiful mistake,
I had to let go of my dreams,
But I started new ones,
I discovered a world I would never have seen,
If you had not been,
You were a mistake,
A glitch in my life plan,
But such a beautiful mistake you were,
You made my life complete.
Part 3
Limerick
There once was a guy named Gay,
Who was, and always is, a bit scary,
He always, wanted to marry,
A girl, just as scary,
And behold, he found, Mary the Hairy.
;)
// Sophie Ståhlberg
Hi Sophie,
SvaraRaderaPart 1:
I liked how you kind of divided your ode into 3 parts, "Ode to their dreams", "Ode to their achievements" and "Ode to their courage". It was a really good ode and i really liked the first 2 lines a lot. "Ode to the people who dreams
They are the builders of our world".
Part 2:
It is funny how you in the first 3 lines end with you, because there is not that many words that one can use that rhymes with you besides the word you =) So i think it really worked out. Overall i did not notice you didn't rhyme that much in your poem as i did. But i guess that is just the way you write. Good poem nonetheless.
Part 3:
This limerick was really strange, because the first, second and third line didn't really rhyme. But it was funny tho.
Cheers
/Stefan
All the three parts are beautifully written but I especially like part 2. It’s very expressive and it’s so rare for a mistake to be beautiful so when happens, it’s awesome. Great choice of words too.
SvaraRaderaHi! I like the ode to the dreamers, and how they are the builders of our world.
SvaraRaderaThe second poem reminds me of some occurrence that was not supposed to happen (a mistake or a glitch), but just because it did happen, your future and whole life were totally changed. That has happened to me. It is really strange to think that the life you live in the present might be the result of some "mistake".